Update 2023-08-21-kotahi-2-0-setting-a-new-standard-in-scholarly-platforms.md

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 The platform tackles key challenges - making standards like JATS attainable without technical staff. It provides enormous flexibility to customize workflows as needed. Sophisticated multitenancy enables the hosting of multiple journals, preprint review, and preprint servers within a single install. Automated PDF production enables consistent, high-quality typesetting at scale. The microservices architecture allows independent scaling and updating of components. 
 
-Scholarly publishing is evolving rapidly, and Kotahi is designed to improve how research is currently while anticipating future needs. By improving existing workflows and anticipating emerging models, Kotahi represents the innovative future of research communication.
+Scholarly publishing is evolving rapidly, and Kotahi is designed to improve how research is currently shared while anticipating future needs. By improving existing workflows and anticipating emerging models, Kotahi represents the innovative future of research communication.
 
 The following is a brief summary of some key Kotahi 2.0 features.
 
 ## Multitenancy Supporting Diverse Use Cases
 
-Managing multiple scholarly publishing groups like journals, preprint servers, or preprint review communities has traditionally required running separate different softwares for each one. This quickly becomes cumbersome and difficult to scale as the number of groups grows.
+Managing multiple scholarly publishing groups like journals, preprint servers, or preprint review communities has traditionally required running separate softwares for each one. This quickly becomes cumbersome and difficult to scale.
 
-Kotahi resolves this issue by providing native multitenancy support for many use cases within a single integrated system. This allows a single Kotahi installation to host any number of journals, preprint servers, or preprint review communities in the one system.
+Kotahi resolves this issue by providing native multitenancy support for many use cases within a single integrated system. This allows a single Kotahi installation to host any number of journals, preprint servers, or preprint review communities in the one installation.
 
 Each group functions independently with its own: